In the sweating discomfort of the summertime heat, I walked through Philadelphia International Airport with several overweight bags, tired eyes, and a bad case of Shigella. Approaching Customs, I noticed the intensity and seriousness on the faces of the customs officers whose responsibility were to …
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Religious Studies Major, Underserved in Africa
Med School, American, Raised on a Farm
I heard the familiar sound of the back door closing gently. My father was returning from driving his dirty, green John Deere tractor in one of our fields. Although he begins his day at 5:00 a.m. every morning, he usually returns at around 7:00 p.m. I never really questioned his schedule when I was a…
MD Medical School, Athlete
Experiences and defining moments shape who we are to become. Moments in time, like when a small-town medical doctor diagnosed my little brother with bacterial meningitis, catching the disease just in time and saving his life, have left me in awe of the medical profession and what it is capable o…
Sample Caribbean Medical School Admission Essay
XXXX University is my first choice for medical school because I am very attracted to the idea of taking a break from mainstream America and living on a beautiful Caribbean island, some where with low stress levels, achieving and sustaining optimal focus on my studies. I seek a medical education …
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