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Immigrant to Canada from Iran, Economic Hardship

I was raised in Tehran, but moved to Canada in 1998, when I was 10 years old. Doctors have been my heroes since my childhood. An avid daydreamer as a child, I would often spend hours each day conjuring up fantasy visions of myself as an important doctor, working alongside my colleagues and arriving …

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African, Nigerian Applicant to Medical School

I’m a 24 year old woman from Nigeria, I have been in the USA for the past 5 years and I am a permanent resident. The strongest part of my application to Medical School is my love for my people back home in Africa. Home is where the heart is and my heart is in Nigeria. I want to spend most of my life…

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Africa, Inequality of Access to Medical Care

On Wednesdays, I was the only visitor for Jorge, an elderly patient in the AIDS and Tropical Disease Ward at Carlos III Hospital in Madrid. A native of Equatorial Guinea, Jorge had full blown AIDS and had been living in Spain illegally because, according to Jorge, his country lacked enough resources…

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Bilingual Spanish, Urban Hispanic Community

"Call 911!" I shouted to my friend as I sprinted down the street. The young Caucasian male had been thrown fifteen yards from the site of impact and surprisingly was still conscious upon my arrival. "My name is Michael. Can you tell me your name?" In his late twenties, he gasped in response as his e…

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Medical School, Emergency Medical Technician, EMT

I want very much to attend the XXXX Medical School at XXXX University because I have always imagined that I would have the privilege of spending my working life as a medical doctor, saving lives, curing ailments, alleviating pain, and contributing to making life better for everyone with whom I e…

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Pre-Medical Studies Certificate, Woman from Tajikistan

Civil war, suffering, poverty and death are things that most Americans, will thankfully never personally experience. Before I was fourteen, I had endured all four. I was born in Dushanbe, Tajikistan and lived through half of a civil war, coming to America with my family as the devastation contin…

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Post Bachelors Pre-Medical Admission

I stared at the words on my company’s semi-annual client satisfaction survey: “have Nilma cloned”.  Three simple words, yet a confirmation that all my hard work, my striving to give all that I am to the people I work with and for were appreciated by those around me.  Reassessing all that I have …

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